I often hear that most writers begin by writing short stories, perhaps in the same way that many filmmakers begin by making short films. What I haven’t decided is whether it’s necessary to master one before starting on the other.
I’ve always been a novel writer. I wrote my first “novel” (though it should more aptly be categorized as a novella) at the age of 10 when I spoke barely any English and had little to no business writing anything at all. I wrote it, and it was crap, but many other things have branched out of that first story I wrote. They’re still crap, but maybe a little less so. Mostly, I just can’t let go of my characters.

I had a point, but I have a tendency to digress - which actually does bring me back to my point: focus. I’m not good at that. I’m not good at short stories. I have several started attempts sitting in my hard drive and they may never see the light of day for the simple fact that I just don’t have the mental discipline required to shape a story in 1000 words. And usually the problem is that I don’t know the characters, and I because I don’t know them, I don’t care about them very much. And if I don’t care about the characters, I lose all interest.
For the same reason, I generally hate reading short stories. I stay away from short story books, even when they’re written by authors I greatly admire.
While some are drawn to books by their author, or title, or subject matter, I’m offen drawn to books by their length. I love really long books, especially really long books that are actually good. For me, it’s important to develop a relationship with the characters, and I find that with short stories, I very rarely end up caring about the characters very much. The story itself might be entertaining, but if I don’t care about the characters, I finish with a sense of disappointment or dissatisfaction that is very rarely the author’s fault.
I like things that never end. I love television shows over films for that very reason. I like the continuity and the feeling of familiarity. I’ll take a good TV series over a good film any time of the day. I rant incessantly about good dialogue and characterization in both novels and shows. I know the writers’ names by heart in the shows that I love, and I can even tell from watching an episode who’s the one who wrote it.
For the most part, I am a dialogue and character writer. I don’t know if these are official terms or not, but I’ll use them anyway. I think dialogue is often my strength, while prose is my weakness. I’m not great at prose, and it never comes easily to me. I imagine the reason for this is that my passion is more geared toward screenwriting than novel-writing, and I hope to one day be able to put that theory to the test.

TBSOL began, actually, as a screenplay, as it was - and is - my intention to make it into a film. But writing a screenplay involves that focus and discipline that I am often lacking.
I should prob —
Okay, just as I was writing that, Karine knocked over a lamp and it fell on my head, so …. what was I talking about?
Oh yes. Focus.
Ow, my head.
Anyway.
Originally, I was very set on getting into a screenwriting course at Rutgers, only to qualify you had to be accepted. And to be accepted, what did you have to do? Write a short story.
I could never write this short story. I started a few. I spend many hopeless hours staring at the damned blinking cursor, and nada. I couldn’t come up with a single storyline that could be written in 10 pages.
So I never applied. And never got in. And I regret that.
As a writer, I approach what I read as a lesson. Each book that I read, each show that I watch, it’s a lesson in something. I read the prose, I listen to the dialogue, watch for pacing, take note of the scenes that air vs. the ones they could’ve written, but didn’t.
In telling a story, focus is very important.
And even after 16 years of writing, I have none.
But I’m still trying.
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Cliche of the day: you’re your own worst critic. I like the short stories you’ve written.
That said, I feel the exact same way. I’ve purchased a few short story collections and actually read them. I’ve enjoyed some of them. However, I feel the same way you do about most of them and the genre in general. I just can’t really bring myself to care about a character I’ve only known for five pages. There’s little growth to be had there. That’s why I periodically give up the idea of publishing short stories.
Even the ’shorts’ I put on my site are about my novel characters for the most part. I know them by now. They have stories to tell me.
Bagumbo Snuff Box by Kurt Vonnegut, Smoke and Mirrors by Neil Gaimen and Pixel Juice by Jeff Noon remain by favourite short story anthologies.
American Gods by Neil Gaimen is a great novel. Read it!
I like your short stories too. But you already know that.
Regarding the short stories, I enjoy them, like I enjoy people watching. I like that it’s a snapshot of the character’s life, that we get to meet them at a specific moment of their life and that we’re getting to draw our own conclusions, or rather, imagine what may have happened before or after.
That said… I think I would dispute the fact that you can’t get to know a character in so few words or pages. I think it entirely depends on the quality of the writing. When reading ‘Pride and Prejudice’, for example - and yes, I realize it’s not a short story, although I think it was initially started as one and expanded upon- there are characters that will only appear for a couple of pages. But in a few lines of dialogue, you get a really good sense of who they are. Granted, though - they’re not complex, and therefore maybe not as interesting. Anyway, to wrap up my point, since I have one, I’ve now read about 4 Kay Scarpetta novels by Patricia Cornwell, and if I think I’ve gotten a sense of who the author is, I don’t feel like I’ve gotten to know Kay Scarpetta the character very much. and I know for a fact I’ve gotten to know more about certain characters that have appeared in great short stories I’ve read.
I see short stories as a glimpse into somebody’s life. I still need to know who the character is (or characters are) and what their lives are like, in the hopes that this will create a realistic character who will keep on living long after the story is done. A while ago, I let some friends read a story of mine that had won a writing competition. I thought I’d received my reward in the prize, but it turned I was wrong. The greatest reward from that story came when one of my friends finished the last word and then demanded: “But what happens next?”
However, I often find that short stories are driven more by an idea than a character. In this case, I try to make sure that the ideas and the characters work together to make a palatable whole.